Peer review

 For the peer review i had my friend Jenna review it. Jenna is a sophomore and 16 years old. She is also in media studies class and participating in the same project as me. She has experience with this project which is why i asked her to peer review it for me. Jenna overall liked the video. She said it had good potential and we used the correct angles. She saw high, low, pan, etc. She also had some negative critics on it though. She believes it needed more suspense. It could've been scarier to add more curiosity. "It would've been cool to add some blood on the knife or on the girl actor" she said. Other than that she agreed that if the movie was out in theaters she would see it. From my perspective i see where jenna could come from. In past blogs i talked about how we added more scenes in. That was so it wasn't so boring and showed people something was coming. We could've made the ending a little more realistic as well. By adding the knife dropping to the ground with fake blood on it to add some curiosity. Like who killed who? you'll never know until it comes to theaters. Now me and onara know what to do for next time we have a project like this. I thanked jenna for her thoughts and for peer reviewing.